Don’t get excited, despite the title it isn’t a newly discovered Jane Austen novel where an opium addicted poet moves in next door to the three attractive daughters living in a Hampshire Rectory.
I decided to include a poem a few days ago when I was discussing moral judgements to be made by poets. When I discovered how many days I have missed posting recently, I decided it was definitely time, as republishing poetry is quick and easy.. I don’t think I’ve posted this one before. If I have, my apologies.
One major change has taken place since this poem was written – 18 carat gold was £38 per gram in 2023 when this was written. It’s now £72. At peak it was about £96. That’s the effect of wars, disturbed markets and political panic.
My contribution to the discussion was to say that I didn’t think it was my job to make decisions based on my perception of morality. I was then asked whether or not I made a moral judgement every time I wrote a poem.
I’m fairly sure that I don’t. This one is just a description of one line on the official documentation relating to the valuation of my father’s estate, with a couple of bits of trivia relating to death. Maybe I should. But to be honest, I have enough trouble wrestling words into a poem, without debating the rights and wrongs of it. I’m just shallow. I could, of course, write a second poem based on this one and the new price of gold, but I’m not sure the world needs another poem about war and capitalism.
That of course, was just one of the questions surrounding poetry and morals. Two others are about the morality of supporting right-wing magazines by submitting (it’s always the right-wing that gets questioned, isn’t it?), and I asked about the morality of reading poems by poets with questionable moral stances.
I will leave it there, as it has the potential to develop in a way that is neither useful or interesting. I’m off to read some poetry. Now, should I try the racist Larkin, the incestuous Byron or the fascist Pound? Even Dylan Thomas was overly fond of the bottle and committed a number of crimes against neckwear. Morals can be so confusing.
Does anyone have a view?
Weighed in the Balance
The Egyptians believed that Anubis would weigh the heart of the deceased against a feather to see if they were worthy of the afterlife. Later, scientists calculated that the human soul weighed 21 grams.
This morning, preparing the paperwork for my late father’s estate, my heart skipped a beat as I saw the details of his life reduced to a weight – 8 grams of 18 carat gold at £38 a gram. That is the price set on his wedding ring, the value that the tax man places on 63 years of marriage.
his life
persists in memory
—dust floats in the sun
First published in Blithe Spirit August 2023.




That was a good poem you wrote for your father. I remember when he passed away.
I am now starting to sort some of my old poems out.
but great title about a book of essays regarding the aftermath of war
Yes, it needs something good to back up the title.
write a poem about the questioning of moral views
I have a working title for one, but no actual inspiration. Julia says that “Why Are There No Babies Called Adolf?” is not one of my better titles.
Good one! As usual. Thanks!
Thank you. 🙂
Really good poem! I have read and reread it. There is a haunting quality to it. As for our values…
Thank you Laurie. 🙂
Not at all 🙂
🙂 Thank you.
Oh yes, I agree with Derrick – pure gold.
Thank you Clare, though I suspect you are too nice to say anything else. 🙂
I really love ‘dust floats in the sun” and the memory lasts.
Thank you. 🙂
A wonderful poem, worth its weight in gold.
🙂 Thank you Derrick.